Peer Edit of Second Draft

Bellringer: Describe, in detail, what you see in the photo. Then, making your best guess, tell the story of what you think the boy is doing.

For the complete story when you are finished, click here. 

I want you to continue to think critically about what you see; invent a story based on the details; add descriptions to what is apparent.

Recap: We worked in pairs peer editing our narrative pieces. You should have your second draft completed for tomorrow, and submitted to me either electronically or printed out. Please print a copy for yourself, or you may hold onto the piece I give back to you, to add to your portfolio. You will need:

1. The first draft

2. The peer edit form

3. The final piece

Homework: Vocabulary quiz tomorrow